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What can we expect from Harry? In his own words “I’m a player who likes to get the ball. During a game I’m not afraid to role my sleeves up and get involved, and I’m always 100% committed on the pitch”
So would you like to highlight those mistakes!The Romford Dagger wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 3:07 pm The spelling mistakes and the lack of punctuation in that article is poor for a professional club.
What can we expect from Harry? In his own words “I’m a player who likes to get the ball. During a game I’m not afraid to role my sleeves up and get involved, and I’m always 100% committed on the pitch”
roll. I haven't read the whole article.RayleighDagger1986 wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:08 pmSo would you like to highlight those mistakes!The Romford Dagger wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 3:07 pm The spelling mistakes and the lack of punctuation in that article is poor for a professional club.
What can we expect from Harry? In his own words “I’m a player who likes to get the ball. During a game I’m not afraid to role my sleeves up and get involved, and I’m always 100% committed on the pitch”
RayleighDagger1986 wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:08 pmSo would you like to highlight those mistakes!The Romford Dagger wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 3:07 pm The spelling mistakes and the lack of punctuation in that article is poor for a professional club.
What can we expect from Harry? In his own words “I’m a player who likes to get the ball. During a game I’m not afraid to role my sleeves up and get involved, and I’m always 100% committed on the pitch”
Your last two are questionable.The Romford Dagger wrote: ↑Sat Jul 21, 2018 3:35 amRayleighDagger1986 wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:08 pmSo would you like to highlight those mistakes!The Romford Dagger wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 3:07 pm The spelling mistakes and the lack of punctuation in that article is poor for a professional club.
That paragraph I’ve linked had these errors:
- The word ‘roll’ spelt incorrectly.
- No full stop at the end of the last sentence.
- No comma after the words ‘during a game’.
- Should be some form of punctuation after the words ‘in his own words’.
That’s four mistakes in just those three sentences. I’m not massively arsed by it but I’m just pointing out that, for a professional football club, that’s very poor.